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Developmental Editing

Developmental Edits on Laptop

An In-depth, deep-dive Editorial Review with comprehensive notes for restructuring and revising your manuscript with a focus on key issues such as purpose, point, theme, plot, character arc, structure, language, voice, pacing.

Developmental Editing:


  • Deep-dive Manuscript Review
  • One 5-8 Page Manuscript Evaluation Feedback Letter
  • Comprehensive Notes for Revision & Restructuring
  • One 60-minute Feedback Call

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$8.00/page ($.032/word) (Standard Manuscript Format: 12-point font, 1-inch margins)

Note: Shorter works (short stories or picture books with fewer than 3,500 words) are invoiced at a flat rate of $100 with no call.

Best For:

Authors with completed manuscripts who are looking for a professional developmental edit with specific, in-depth editorial feedback with actionable items, including comprehensive notes on how revise and  to reshape your manuscript and really make it shine.

“Sharon is smart and has a great sense of the craft. I came to her confused and dispirited and came away with confidence and a clear vision of how to move forward. Her notes were concrete and manageable. I hope to get my act together to bring her another manuscript soon.”

–Ann Chamberlin, Author of the Reign of the Favored Women Series and the History Of Women’s Seclusion in The Middle East.