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Manuscript Evaluation & Editorial Feedback

A High-Level Developmental Pass focused on Big-Picture Components: Purpose, point, theme, character/point of view, structure, plotting and pacing.

Editorial Feedback on Your Completed Draft:


  • Single Editorial Review Pass
  • One 4-6 Page Editorial and Evaluation Feedback Letter
  • One 60-minute Feedback Call


$4.50/page (Standard Manuscript Format: 12-point font, 1-inch margins)

Best For:

Authors with completed manuscripts who are looking for a professional editorial review with actionable feedback on creating a tighter, more engaging, stronger manuscript.


Sharon’s review of my book was so helpful and thorough! She was very professional and gave me weekly updates while she read and compiled her feedback. She pointed out a lot of things that helped me make sense of other beta readers’ feedback, as well as a number of things I hadn’t considered yet.

She gave positive feedback as well, for what was working. Her edit letter showed she has a strong understanding of craft and she provided a number of helpful resources to help me further. Sharon also gave detailed feedback on my first chapter, to demonstrate how exactly I could make the changes she was suggesting.

The phone call was also extremely helpful for me to ask questions and get an even fuller sense of what her edits suggested. It really clarified a number of things I’d never thought about before. I’m going into my revisions really well-prepared now, and I’d recommend Sharon to anyone as a book coach. Thank you!

–Anna Read, MS Evaluation Client