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Manuscript Evaluation & Editorial Feedback

A High-Level Developmental Pass focused on Big-Picture Components: Purpose, point, theme, character/point of view, structure, plotting and pacing.

Editorial Feedback on Your Completed Draft:


  • Single Editorial Review Pass
  • One 4-6 Page Editorial and Evaluation Feedback Letter
  • One 60-minute Feedback Call


$4.50/page (Standard Manuscript Format: 12-point font, 1-inch margins)

Best For:

Authors with completed manuscripts who are looking for a professional editorial review with actionable feedback on creating a tighter, more engaging, stronger manuscript.


“Sharon is smart and has a great sense of the craft. I came to her confused and dispirited and came away with confidence and a clear vision of how to move forward. Her notes were concrete and manageable. I hope to get my act together to bring her another manuscript soon.”

–Ann Chamberlin, Author of the Reign of the Favored Women Series and the History Of Women’s Seclusion in The Middle East.


Sharon’s review of my book was so helpful and thorough! She was very professional and gave me weekly updates while she read and compiled her feedback. She pointed out a lot of things that helped me make sense of other beta readers’ feedback, as well as a number of things I hadn’t considered yet.

I’m going into my revisions really well-prepared now, and I’d recommend Sharon to anyone as a book coach.

–Anna Read, Client